Wednesday, August 29, 2007

19

DWI
a wiry idea
Ohio icy

6 comments:

Sister K said...

it's not winter yet
ohio? when you go there?
dwi you? huh?

Kicking N. Screaming said...

Is this haiku named
for that great Steely Dan song?
Sweet things from Boston...

karen said...

midnight drive; no drinks
19 letters in haiku!
dare: you use fewer.

karen said...

"W" is three
syllables my dear sister
your last line? too long.

Sister K said...

off to work today
no time to write a response
still don't get this one?

Epiphany Alone said...

the fewest number
of letters in haiku is
19, says Karen

she dares you to make
a shorter haiku than that
one they wrote. you know

w is a
tricky letter that has three syllables, not one.